I was kept in the darkI had no one to stay beside me
I got isolated as usual
I shed my tears for each moment of my sadness
I cried in pain searching for someone,
but yet nothing changed ; everything thing remained still.
With the minimum hope I waited for that crustal day
A day with maximum hope which could be remembered forever
Hoping the day would come soon i waited for u
You did come on the day which changed my entire life.
Love you now and always will.
Done by - Bhanuka Udugama
whoa!!! awesome!!! good work!
ReplyDeleteThanks alot... bt not good as you... u r the best ;)
ReplyDeletehey bro congraz
ReplyDeleteThnx a lot bro... r u still in US ?
ReplyDeleteNo probz... hey don't say that! u're awesum too! wat happened to the positive attitude huh?
ReplyDeleteWell letz take it this way... um kinda awesome... not sooooooo awesome like u.. u r way ahead... n thtz the truth......... well c still hvin the positive attitude :)
ReplyDeletenoo ur not kinda awesum...... u wayyy more awesome than me.... ur poems r really nice... i mean it.... mine are kinda stereotype :)
ReplyDeleteHey u shud admit the truth tht um no way closer to u..... um far far away......... my poems r simple n short even an small kid mite find it easy to digest lol....... thnx a lot.. bt urs r better thn mine.... :) itz not like dat... ur ones r emotional
ReplyDeletei won't.... no ur not... ur good!!! like ma'am says "a little bit of sense is better than a page of rubbish" welcome :) MINE? MINE r EMOTIONAL?!?!?!?!? more like damn boring!!!!
ReplyDeleteI will hve to force u then..... u gotta admit the truth....... well ur poems contains sense so HA! .. yes pretty emotional.... itz not boring at all... ur poems contain hidden meanings......
ReplyDeleteyeah? and HOW exactly r u gna force me? threaten to kill me? that wont work... i WANT to die so... HOW? emotional? they AREN'T! theyr just plain lame!! :PP ahhh the hidden meanings thing - do literature.... when you try to look for hidden meanings in other poems i guess it gets into urs as well :PP
ReplyDeleteWell how to force u ???? well i dunno... u wud be automatically forced...... TRUTH shud be admitted heheh..... well i wud never kill a fat so... n itz hard to kill a barrel like u.. so impossible for me..... u wanna die ??? me 2.. half dead... not lame mcn....well no thnx no eng lit3coz it haunts me... shakespeare circle around my head @ nitez...... arghhh minu come on..... for once think postively.... don't under estimate urself... coz u r seriously talented... ADMIT THE TRUTH.... or else i wud let u VOMIT THE TRUTH
ReplyDeleteu cant AUTOMATICALLY force! theres no such thin! :PP yeah well if im a barrel whats N....? why r u dead and wats mcn? wow! you love shakespeare! that must be why he circles around your head at night!! :PP i AM thinking positively!! if i was thinking negatively i would say i can't write... but im not... im saying that im ok and im proud of it :DD i am not "seriously talented"!! how r u gna make me vomit huh? you don't have control over my umm.... vomiting skills?
ReplyDeletewell automatically forced well u cud..... hard to explain bt i'll explain sumday...... well wtz N ? um dead coz of this freakin sickness..... sorry mcn = machan... heehe... i don't love him .... i don't hate him either.. i jst feel his stuff is boring...... glad to hear tht postive thinking coming out of ur big mouth..... eheh KATA GADHAYA....well there is a thing sum ppl for lies say i can't do this n so on.... bt actually they knw about themselves n knws tht they can do it... so according to me u r playing the same game as them....... vomit ofcourse well i jst said tht..... control over ur wt ??? well i will feed u with KAKKI until u say u admit the truth.. so u will admit the truth whilst vomitting... c mage punchi cherry mole
ReplyDeleteummm someday? What day? N= Your favourite girl in the world!!! :PP Ohh!!! KIRI PANU GAYA D? you'llget over it!! No.... his stuff is alright. There's one poem that applies to you and C!! kiyanna kattiya lu!!!! No... I honestly mean it. I am not good. Those people who do that are STUPID! I actually mean what I say!! OMG! EW!!!! YOU ARE SO DISGUSTING!!! Oh wow! You are actually gonna touch it? And its not like I'll wait until you do that!!! HA!!!! mole punchi nang thama!!!
ReplyDeletesomeday....... one day on a bright monday so called the minuri dharmasena wud admit about her shire talent........... KPG is over nw..... well hmm cud say hez stuff kinda k... bt not d best tho......... me n C ? wt poem ????? nopez nopez u r seriously gud....... frankly speaking u r soo damnnnnnnnnnn good.............. well who dat r stupid ????? well it doesn't count u i think...... hhee am i ? aww thnx a lot... so i'll do dat for sure........ well i hve gloves in my hand......... well um quick ... u will hve no time to escape...... ow ow punchi mole ratharan mole... loku mole kunu mole....
ReplyDeletetoo bad i dont HAVE a talent thats worth mentioning!!! over?? sure d?????????// yeah def not the best!!!! well there is this sonnet 116 or something in the lit anthology!! check it out!!!! i am NOT "DAMNNNNNNNN GOOD"!!!!!! people who pretend that they can't do something when they know they can!!! you are.... welcome??? EW EW EW!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletewell u r habit is tht u never admit sumthing... well u do bt rarely........ over i guez..... hehe lit antho ? ohh k....... kkk i will....... well okkk u r not damn gud bt u r jst gud... eheheh.... well wt ???? me ????? i never do like tht.......... EW EW EW AW AW AW AW....... NO 2
ReplyDeletehaha lol is that good or bad? haha but checck... just to be sure :P ok thanks :DD i didnt say u did :PP URK!! COME ON!!!
ReplyDeleteur habit is not good @ all... i wud really love if u changed tht habit of urs.. coz everytime u don't admit sumthing which is mostly the truth i feel sooo sad...... i cry n cry n cry until hotu comes........ then hemberisawa occurs so i cry more... welcome :D COME ON ???? yes MINU COME ON DO NO 2 WITHOUT HOLDING IT FOR WEEKS , MONTHS N YEARS
ReplyDeletereally? ok fine... hows this? i rule i rock im d best!!! ok now? awwww u wnt d hotu handkerchief? umm EW! how gross can sum1 get!
ReplyDeletewoweeeeeeee thtzzzzzz awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... um over thrilled.......... um smiling....... i let out a fart also............ kk sure give give.. g8t help............. well AW say it like this hw sweet cud a person be.... ehhe ^_^
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